Talk:Lucius Manlius Torquatus (praetor 49 BC)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:05, 4 August 2018 (UTC)

I'll read through this one. Courcelles (talk) 21:05, 4 August 2018 (UTC)

• I read this article last night and didn't see any problems. Re-reading now. Courcelles (talk) 05:12, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

• Okay, two points:

1) The name of his wife is not sourced or mentioned in the prose. Children?

• That was a last minute addition and like an idiot I forgot to source it. In searching for the source I did find some further information though. (I had thought that I had scraped the barrel.) No, can't find Lavinia. I have removed her for now. It may come back to me once I stop trying to force it.

2) The bit about Lorem ipsum seems to be a bit too far off-topic for this article?

• Sadly you are correct. Fascinating, but straying too far. Deleted.

Courcelles (talk) 05:15, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

• Anything else? Gog the Mild (talk) 13:50, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

• Nope, this meets the criteria. Courcelles (talk) 16:50, 5 August 2018 (UTC)