Talk:Luther James-Wildin/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:58, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Avoid single-sentence paras, I would embellish para 1 of the lead a touch.
• Is there a general link for "academy"?
• "for Highfield Rangers" as this is a relatively unknown side, perhaps say "in Leicester"?
• Worth noting that Grantham Town etc are non-League.
• "James-Wildin started.." He started.
• We have a link for Sunday league at Sunday league football.
• "part of a "very successful young side" at " according to?
• "to try and play at a" no need for "try and"
• "one-week trial at Notts County" don't repeat Notts County.
• Link for professional football.
• "at Grantham" Town.
• Link manager.
• "the play-off places" link.
• "from 30-yards" no hyphen, and convert.
• "EFL League Two Goal of the Month" any links for this award?
• "the COVID-19 pandemic in March" there's a UK specific Covid article.
• "in 14th-place in" no need to hyphenate.
• "for Antigua & Barbuda " it was "and" not "&" before.
• "assists" link.
• "substitute" link.
• "as a right-back and" link right-back first time.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:16, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Hi @The Rambling Man:. Thanks for taking the time out to review the article. I have made all of the suggested changes, although wasn't able to locate a link for the Goal of the Month awards. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 23:55, 2 September 2021 (UTC)