Talk:Luther Monument (Washington, D.C.)

Latest comment: 3 days ago by Rollinginhisgrave in topic GA Review
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Sorry I somehow accidentally botched the format when I added a wikilink, but that was no reason to remove the link itself. 2600:8800:1880:188:5604:A6FF:FE38:4B26 (talk) 17:23, 10 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

Requested move 18 March 2020

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The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: not moved. Clearly no consensus to move this article. Number 57 21:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)Reply


Luther Monument (Washington, D.C.)Statue of Martin Luther (Washington, D.C.)WP:VAMOS has been updated and now says: "For portrait sculptures of individuals in public places the forms "Statue of Fred Foo" "Equestrian statue of Fred Foo" or "Bust of Fred Foo" is recommended, unless a form such as "Fred Foo Memorial" or "Monument to Fred Foo" is the WP:COMMONNAME. If further disambiguation is needed, because there is more than one sculpture of the same person with an article, then disambiguation by location rather than the sculptor is usually better." Evidence the D.C. work is more commonly known as the "Luther Monument"? --Another Believer (Talk) 05:01, 18 March 2020 (UTC) Relisting. BegbertBiggs (talk) 16:34, 25 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • Oppose-This statue is a cast of a statue in Germany that is called the German equivalent of "Luther Monument." As such the US statue has always been known as Luther Monument beginning in the 19th century. Proof is found on ngram viewer. It is not quite the same as any old statue of Martin Luther; there are plenty of those, but most are not known as "Luther Monument." The statue in Germany was erected the same year the seminary (I think in Wittenberg) was shuttered. It was controversial; the statue may have been sort of like a consolation prize. Sad, I know.--Epiphyllumlover (talk) 03:11, 23 March 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Oppose as "Monument" is perfectly clear. Red Slash 23:27, 4 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Luther Monument (Washington, D.C.)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: APK (talk · contribs) 03:36, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 08:08, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

I'll start this review. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 08:08, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

General Comments

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I'll be adding comments as I go.

Prose and content

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  • Question: He told a reporter from the Lutheran Observer this is the first mention?
  • make the idea reality weasley
  • Suggestion: The idea soon spread amongst Lutheran pastors throughout the area. An association was formed to make the idea reality. On Valentine's Day, 1883, an image of the proposed statue was printed in Lutheran newspapers. Soon, the Luther Place Memorial Church, then named the Memorial Evangelical Lutheran Church of Washington, D.C., suggested the statue be placed in front of its church. Donations soon arrived rw to avoid repeating soon
  • Dedication section, particularly first and second paragraphs seem excessive detail to go into; don't need a play-by-play of an event pre-dedication. is this covered in such detail by secondary sources? If not it's probably undue. 85% is sourced to one primary source.
  • "Nevertheless, the event ended with a prayer" not really even a suggestion but I find the use of nevertheless here funny. They prayed even though people got hurt?
  • E. RIETSCHEL FACIT. GEGOSSEN LAUCHHAMMER 1884 translate, or leave out the exact wording, just note there's a German transcription. en-wiki.
  • An association was formed is this the committee referred to later?
  • the North German Lloyd Steamship Company too much detail
  • Add when Martin Luther's birthday is when saying they tried to make it for the 400th anniversary.

Sources

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  • The article and source list are short enough I'm going to make my way through a bit more systematically than a spot check.
1 - 2)  Y
3 - 5) Can't access
6)  Y
7) "Spilling all of the dignitaries into the crowd of 5,000 spectators below." Why do we think there were hundreds of dignitaries on the stage?
8)  Y
9)  Y
10)  Y

Other things

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  • Images: All tagged appropriately, appropriate captions (some redundancy in referring to "the statue" in most captions when it's visibly in the photo.)  Y
  • Referencing all good (no OR, COPYVIO. Earwig down, based off spotcheck)  Y

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 09:05, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply