Talk:Lysergic Acid Diethylamide (Fringe)/GA1
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Reviewer: Matthew RD 03:00, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
Hello, I shall be conducting the review, coming up. -- Matthew RD 03:00, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Well written: Notes below
- Factually accurate?: Passed
- Broadness in coverage: Passed
- Neutral: Passed
- Stability: Passed.
- Images: Fine. Passed.
- "An estimated 3.6 million viewers watched," watched what?
- After reading the reviews section, it seems to me it was a bit more positive than mixed. Looking back here's the verdict of the reviews;
- The L.A. Times loved it, but found some people might not, so mixed
- SFScope was positive
- A.V. Club was positive
- IGN was more positive than mixed.
I suppose if you find a fifth review and add it maybe we could decide if it is more mixed or positive.
- "making it difficult to contact [her] by normal means"
- I think it is better to remove "part of Olivia's mind", it is already established they are all already in her mind.
- At least two intances of "wakes back up", I think "wakes up back" makes more sense? Although to be honest it seems they both make equally as much sense. It's up to you.
- "as the person that will kill her", you mean "as the person who will kill her"?
- ""Lysergic Acid Diethylamide" features the return of Leonard Nimoy to television following his earlier announcement of having retired from acting." Needs reworking
- "Nimoy stated that when the writers approached [him] about the role"
And those are my comments. I'll leave it on hold for seven days. Thank you. -- Matthew RD 21:12, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- All fixed (except "wakes back up" suggestion - decided they both make sense). I changed the reviews from mixed to generally positive. Thanks for the review, Ruby2010 comment! 21:35, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Then, it is a pass. Good job! -- Matthew RD 00:19, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
Technical Note
editI just watched this episode and noticed that Walter tells Astrid to mix up "2000 milligrams" of LSD. Since LSD is effective in dosages measured in tens-to-hundreds of Micrograms, this is WAY overblown. At a 100-microgram dose, that would be 20,000 doses, and even at the "classic" 250-microgram level of Albert Hofmann's famed "bicycle ride", this would be 8,000 doses.