Talk:M-88 (Michigan highway)/GA1
Latest comment: 16 years ago by GaryColemanFan in topic GA Review
GA Review
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This is a nice, short article. I did a little copyediting, and found only two things to mention here:
- "The highway was not listed on the National Highway System nor included in the Lake Michigan Circle Tour." - my understanding is that "or" would be used instead of "nor" in this situation. "Nor" is generally paired with "neither", although "The highway was not listed on the National Highway System nor is it included in the Lake Michigan Circle Tour." would also be grammatically correct.
- "M-88 starts in the community of Eastport blocks east of the Grand Traverse Bay of Lake Michigan" - is there a word missing after Eastport?
I'll place the nomination on hold to allow for these concerns to be addressed and/or discussed. Any questions or comments can be placed here, as this page is on my watchlist. Best wishes, GaryColemanFan (talk) 20:26, 17 October 2008 (UTC)
- Should be address now. Let me know any further feedback if needed. Imzadi1979 (talk) 20:44, 17 October 2008 (UTC)
Looks good. I'll promote this to GA. GaryColemanFan (talk) 20:58, 17 October 2008 (UTC)