Talk:MOD Pizza/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cptnono (talk · contribs) 06:02, 17 January 2015 (UTC)

Review will follow shortly.Cptnono (talk) 06:02, 17 January 2015 (UTC)

I am quick failing this article for now. Below are some notes. I would be more than happy to readdress the article with some more work. Unfortunately, it seems like a tall order to get to GA status in the short-term.

Well-written:

The lead section should be able to stand alone as a summary of the subject. The current two lines are not sufficient.

"800-degree" needs a unit and conversion (F then C)

"DIY" is mentioned a couple of times. It might be useful to write "do it yourself(DIY)" in the first instance.

There is a gab between refs 7 and 8. Also, which one is attributed to "family friendly"?

Similarly, there is a gap between the period ad ref 11.

Is "hand-spun" milkshakes a real thing?

From a quick look at other pizza chains, I'm not seeing others that use the same section layout.

Verifiable seems good besides the one case of attribution mentioned above.

Broad in its coverage

This is the biggest hurdle. At this point the article needs much more. Suggestions include more on the history, the founders, health and other culinary stats, and so on.

Neutrality

It reads almost as a promotion without more information.

Stability is OK

Images

There are too many images to support the lacking prose. I suggest adding a commons category and removing the images for now.

Cptnono (talk) 06:16, 17 January 2015 (UTC)