Talk:M (James Bond)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 11:22, 31 January 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   ""once again under written, and brown is not allowed the opportunity to explore and reveal his character traits,[33] with the character being "too nice"." - is the sentence from once to traits a quote?

   ""Christ, I miss the Cold War")." - why a bracket?

   "is a out-dated relic" - an?

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   Ref 6,10,12,16,17,20,23,29,50,51,53 don't point to any citation. Overall fine.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• All the above now completed. Cheers - SchroCat (^ • @) 13:27, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

• You forgot 50,51--♫GoP♫_T^C_N 15:16, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

• Sorry - now done! - SchroCat (^ • @) 23:29, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

• Some formatting issues

The quote box could do with aligning to either the left or right side, with the text wrapped around it.

• The citation follows on directly from the preceeding text, so it has to follow and not have text wrapped around it. - SchroCat (^ • @) 00:09, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

• I agree with Schrodinger. --♫GoP♫_T^C_N 15:16, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

Where the films are listed there is a bit white space. I would put Bernard Lee's and Judi Dench's films/games into 2 columns to remove some of this white space.

• Thanks - I'll have a think about the best way to get this to look good, as well as flow properly. - SchroCat (^ • @) 00:09, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

• I agree with Mattg82. The white space is a bit distracting.--♫GoP♫_T^C_N 15:16, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

Mattg82 (talk) 23:53, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

• All now sorted - I hope! Let me know if you would like any more changes undertaken. Cheers - SchroCat (^ • @) 23:29, 4 February 2012 (UTC)