Talk:Maetel Legend
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editJust FYI guys the central park media link is dead, those guys are long gone. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 121.222.30.10 (talk) 09:56, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
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Plot section has some critical issues
editThe plot section has some critical issues:
- The plot section as a whole is inconsistent with the plot of the actual titular OVA work.
- The plot section is not written in proper English language.
Revised Plot proposal:
LaMetal is a planet whose inhabitants life can span thousands of years and in the past its highly elliptical orbit made it approach Earth exactly once every 1000 years. After dramatic events however its path has been disrupted and now LaMetal is drifting in the cold depths of space and with its own artificial sun slowly fading away.
Queen La Andromeda Promethium, the legitimate ruler of LaMetal, becoming more and more desperate to find a solution and save her peoples from starvation and the harsh conditions under which her home planet has fallen, turns to the metanoid scientists (an advanced mechanical lifeform), seeking advice.
Hardgear, the lead of the scientists advisors, suggests that the whole human population of the planet should undergo a radical transformation, the method for which he has already devised, providing the human inhabitants with a fully mechanized body, that is impervious to hunger and freezing temperatures and has a virtually eternal lifespan.
The Queen is initially unconvinced but pressed by the worsening situation, she finally embraces the proposal and announces publicly that this is now her will as the ruler of LaMetal and all inhabitants will have to undergo the mechanization process, herself included.
To her dismay though, her twin daughters Maetel and Emeraldas sternly express their unwillingness to comply and this sets in motions the following events.