Talk:Magnetic shark repellent
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editNeeds to be less like a c.v. or advertisement, more like a dispassionate review. We call this WP:NPOV. Refs should be put inline where possible. Look at other articles to get with the house style. Macdonald-ross (talk) 09:58, 16 January 2013 (UTC)
Someone expert in editing please show up to do minor corrections, am not good at it.:
At the end of the Biology paragraph shows :
... "especially as the head region moves back and forth during swimming (Lohmann and Johnsen 2000). "...
Poor language, there is no 'back and forth' as a chicken. Can be 'side to side' movement instead.
MB 08Jun2020 Externet. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2605:A000:7FC0:25:14F5:5DF0:A2EA:3BF2 (talk) 17:33, 8 June 2020 (UTC)