Talk:Magnets (song)/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 02:53, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

• Grabbing this for review if that is okay with you. I will most likely get to this later next week or next weekend. Aoba47 (talk) 02:53, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• Please add ALT text for the infobox image.
• For this sentence (Its was noted for having a different sound from the duo's debut album Settle (2013) and compared to Lorde's work on "Tennis Court" (2013).), please identify who is doing the noting and comparing here. Is it critics?
• For this part ("Magnets" is described as an atmospheric electropop song with influences of), I would remove “is described as” and just say “is”.

Background and composition

• Please add ALT text for the image.
• For the image caption, add a period at the end of the sentence as it is a complete sentence.
• For the image, I would add the year in which it was taken.
• I would link Disclosure and Lorde upon their first use in the body of the article.
• I think that you can paraphrase this quote ("no management or bodyguards”).
• For this quote ("drum sounds to the chords.”), the period should be on the outside of the quotation marks. Same for this quote ("gone past the point of no return.”). I believe that punctuation is only allowed in quotation marks in full quotes, I would check the entire article for this.
• Unlink “beats per minute” as it redirects to “tempo”, which is already linked in the same sentence.
• If the song is described as both house and electropop, then should house also be in the lead and infobox?
• Digital Spy should be in italics.

Reception

• I would link cleveland.com and use the full title in the prose and reference.

Music video

• Add ALT text for the image.
• Add a reference for this part (and was released on 29 September 2015.).
• For this sentence (It has been described as a mature direction from the singer's previous videos.), identify who is describing it this way.
• Add a reference for this part (She revealed that enjoyed "stepping outside" of herself to play the role of a hit-woman.) and this part (Lorde, dressed in a latex black outfit then arrives with his wife, as he is tied to a chair. It is revealed that Lorde was hired by his wife to be a hit-woman. The video ends with Lorde pushing the man into the pool and setting him ablaze.).

Live performances

• Include the year in which “Omen” was released.
• Did Lorde also perform “Omen” at SNL? The current wording suggests that both Disclosure and Lorde performed with Sam Smith, so I just want to double-check this part.

References

• Make sure that all of the work/publisher parameters are linked for the citations.
• For Reference 74, Disclosure should not be in all caps.
• For Reference 30, NZ Herald should be The New Zealand Herald.

Final comments

• Great work as always! I will pass this once my comments are addressed. Aoba47 (talk) 18:06, 29 January 2018 (UTC)

Another article off the check-list. Thank you again! De88 (talk) 00:52, 31 January 2018 (UTC)

Verdict

• Thank you for addressing everything! I will ✓ Pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 02:18, 31 January 2018 (UTC)

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