Talk:Magnum P.I. (2018 TV series) season 2/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:36, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

Hey, we meet again! I'll be reviewing this article and will have my assessment by Thursday 12:00pm ET. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 02:36, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

Sounds great! Definitely looking forward to working with you again. Thanks, TheDoctorWho (talk) 03:21, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Archive all archivable sources. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• Because it certainly will become an article, I would link "third season" to Magnum P.I. (2018 TV series, season 3). Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• Cast section passes MOS:TVCAST so that's good. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• Episode summaries are all under 200 words and pass MOS:TVPLOT. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• To add clarity, add the episode title "He Came by Night" in between the sentence found in "production" that reads: "On the November 15, 2019, episode the band". Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• In "Marketing", link "tenth season" to Hawaii Five-0 (2010 TV series, season 10). Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• Also in "Marketing", add commas after "the Hawaii Five-0 series finale" and "In Canada". Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• "Viewing figures" and "Home media" both pass MOS:TVRELEASE.

• Well, those are my first set of suggestions. Ping me when you have added comments. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Everything you mentioned has been taken care of. TheDoctorWho (talk) 18:25, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

• In "Development", remove the comma after 2019 in the sentence, "On the November 15, 2019,". Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 18:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• Remove the gap between "Marketing" and "Viewing figures". Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 18:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• In "Marketing", fix the "tenth season" link. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 18:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• In reference 36, could you change the link from Variety (magazine) to simply Variety?

• @TheDoctorWho: Well, this is my second and final set of suggestions. Great work on the article! Ping me when done. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 18:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done with those as well! TheDoctorWho (talk) 19:11, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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