Talk:Maison James Norman Hall
Latest comment: 2 years ago by SL93 in topic Did you know nomination
 | A fact from Maison James Norman Hall appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 26 November 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 19:59, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
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Mural at the museum
- ... that the James Norman Hall Museum is where the The Bounty Trilogy was written? Source: https://web.archive.org/web/20211108135307/https://www.tahitiheritage.pf/maison-james-norman-hall-musee/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Lamprey pie
- Comment: Hmm, I struggled with a strong hook, so please add any betters ideas!
Created by Lajmmoore (talk). Self-nominated at 19:35, 8 November 2021 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, no other policy issues except missing citation for last sentence of History section. The image is used in article, freely licensed, but looks blurry at small size, I doubt it will be used.
- The hook says he wrote TNT in the house, but the article does not say that. The article only says he built the house sometime after moving to Tahiti in 1924. It doesn't say when he built the house or wrote TNT. The NYT does say he moved in to the house in 1926. If you add that to the article, and say when he wrote TNT (1932-1934), then the hook will be stating things from the article.
- Alternatively, another hook could be about how even though the house was declared a National Monument, it still continued to deteriorate due to lack of funds.
- Thanks very much MB - and thanks for spotting and clarifying my mistake! I've changed the sentence to reflect what you rightly point out. Lajmmoore (talk) 00:12, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- Lajmmoore, one more thing, you still need to add the missing citation in the History section. MB 00:21, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- MB Thanks for pointing that out - fixed and clarified now. Lajmmoore (talk) 08:15, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- Issues resolved. QPQ done. Good to go.
MB 14:40, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- Issues resolved. QPQ done. Good to go.
- MB Thanks for pointing that out - fixed and clarified now. Lajmmoore (talk) 08:15, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- Lajmmoore, one more thing, you still need to add the missing citation in the History section. MB 00:21, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
