Talk:Making Out (song)
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 11:37, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
Soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:37, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
Lead
edit- You may remove "rock" and leave it only with "band"
- It was released → It was made available (to avoid word repetitions)
- Add a comma after "studio album"
- remix of single → remix of the single
- add year of release in brackets after the song's title
- The composition → The recording
- remove "electronica"
- and by No Doubt → remove "by" here
- song, the lyrics → song, its lyrics
- music critics. Several critics pointed → music critics, with several of them pointing out
- others criticized → others criticizing
Infobox
edit- Album Version → album version
Background and composition
edit- The song was recorded → The track was recorded (to avoid word repetitions)
- set "exclusively" before "released"
- Set release year in brackets after song's title.
- interlude, accompanied → interlude, which is accompanied
- Set comma after "seventh studio album"
- Stefani turns → The singer turns (word repetition)
Critical reception
edit- disliked the track's → disliked the song's (word rep.)
- it and Rockwell's → it and American singer Rockwell's
- Add a comma after "PopMatters"
Credits and personnel
edit- Credits and personnel adapted from Rock Steady liner notes, Interscope Records → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Rock Steady.
Release history
edit- Unlink format and and label
- Interscope Records → Interscope
Outcome
editI've put this On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing and don't forget to ping me when you're ready with this. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 00:08, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: All done! Thanks so much! Carbrera (talk) 01:44, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.