Talk:Manam (film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 08:38, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 08:39, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Plot

• Wikilink "Salsa dance" and write a capital S for Salsa.

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Production

• "Reliance Entertainment presented the film." — by presented, do you mean "co-produced and distributed"?

Yes. Rephrased the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• "Neetu Chandra, who worked with Kumar on Yavarum Nalam (2009), made a cameo appearance in the film." — Is this mentioned in ref no 19?

Yes. it is, but the film's name was mentioned as 13B however. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• "Due to Nageswara Rao's death, a song's tune was replaced with another and a few lines of the song Nenu Puttanu from the film Prem Nagar (1971)." — do you mean "another" as in "another tune"?

Yes. Rephrased the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• Wikilink "goatee".

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• "left Switzerland on 18 June 2013" — did she leave the country (or) is it "left for Switzerland"?

The latter. Rephrased the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• Present the full form of BITS Pilani for more clarity.

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• Wikilink "backwaters".

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Release

• Wikilink all districts, cities and countries (except those that already have a wikilink).

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:13, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• Can you rephrase "platinum disc function". (better, you can add a footnote about what it is).

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:15, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• Write the full form of "TRP rating" and, if possible, wikilink it.

TRP is linked but is it necessary to write its full form? Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:15, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

If it is wikilinked, then no problem. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 16:17, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Reception

• In the critical reception section, remove the italics from Cinemalead, Sify, Oneindia Entertainment and IndiaGlitz as they are websites, not newspapers.

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:18, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• In the overseas portion of the BO section, some places it is spelled "US", in other places, it is "United States". Rewrite it as "the United States".

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:21, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Notes

• Provide sources for notes a and c.

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:10, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

• Provide a source for note e.

Wiki itself has no source for the same in its related article. Let me find if any. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:21, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Upendra helps me, but is this sufficient enough for the note? Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:25, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

@Pavanjandhyala: Yes it is, change 0.5 million to 50,000 and cite this source. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 16:29, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:29, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

References

• Rewrite Oneindia.in as Oneindia.com as Oneindia.in is a redirect.

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:10, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.

   Pass or Fail:

@Pavanjandhyala: Congratulations on your 6th consecutive GA. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 16:35, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Finally, after a really huge struggle, i could achieve in my goal of giving a tribute to ANR. Thanks for reviewing. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:37, 24 February 2015 (UTC)