Talk:Manny Ramirez/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Secret (talk · contribs) 02:39, 14 January 2014 (UTC)

I am doing this review per request. But give me a few days however, as I still got 2 more GA reviews to finish and this will be an extremely detailed review. Thanks Secret ^account 02:39, 14 January 2014 (UTC)

Perfect. My semester ends Friday, so I have some exams to take throughout this week. Thanks for your willingness to review this, Secret. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 02:41, 14 January 2014 (UTC)

Well I did a quick glance though it and I see major problems with the article.... it needs some massive expansion, hardly anything written about him on his Cleveland days, eight seasons into barely three paragraphs!! Playoff heroics and World Series into one paragraph!!! very statsy, nothing on his playing style or his popularity with fans outside a two sentence "personality" section, multiple dead links, and so forth. This is going to be a fail unless you want me to go though how to proceed with this article for a chance to pass GA in the future. Secret ^account 03:12, 14 January 2014 (UTC)

In that case, I request to withdraw to make improvements without a GAR hanging over my head. Too much work is needed still. Sorry. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 01:53, 15 January 2014 (UTC)