Talk:Manresa Island/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:21, 22 July 2019 (UTC)

Comments

• " ...as Boutons Island ... Keyser Island was..." awkward sequence.
  • Rephrased. Should be clearer now. Ergo Sum 00:42, 23 July 2019 (UTC)
• Unlikely to need "marsh" to be linked, commonplace word as far as I'm concerned.
  • I linked it only because its technical, ecological sense seems important here. I wouldn't know the precise meaning of marsh offhand, even though I might have an idea of what it is. Ergo Sum 00:43, 23 July 2019 (UTC)
• " in the late 1800s" is that as close as we can get? Not even down to decade?
  • Did a bit of deductive reasoning and determined that the sale had to have occurred in 1888 or 1889. Accompanied it with a ref. Ergo Sum 00:47, 23 July 2019 (UTC)
• "establishing a retreat center.[6] The retreats " singular to plural in short order here.
  • I'm not really seeing the issue. In the former sentence, retreat is used as an adjective, whereas in the latter it is used as a noun. That seems like a reasonable basis for switching number. Ergo Sum 00:48, 23 July 2019 (UTC)
    • I think my confusion comes from the fact that this para has the first sentence about generic retreats, the second about the specific retreat and the third back to generic retreats again... The Rambling Man (REJOICE!) 09:02, 24 July 2019 (UTC)
    • Ergo Sum just this to cover off? The Rambling Man (REJOICE!) 10:26, 26 July 2019 (UTC)
      • The Rambling Man Again, I really don't see the issue with this. Nonetheless, I've rephrased the sentence so that it is consistently in the plural. Ergo Sum 03:08, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
• " doing significant ecological " I have a pathological hatred of "doing" in the encyclopedia, could we use "causing"?
  • Done. Ergo Sum 00:48, 23 July 2019 (UTC)
• "significant expansion over the years, with the most dramatic expansions " bit repetitive here.
  • Rephrased. Ergo Sum 00:49, 23 July 2019 (UTC)

Otherwise good to go. So I'll put it on hold for now. The Rambling Man (REJOICE!) 12:36, 22 July 2019 (UTC)

• @The Rambling Man: Thank you for your comments. I've responded to all of them. Ergo Sum 00:49, 23 July 2019 (UTC)

All good, thanks for your patience, promoted. The Rambling Man (REJOICE!) 06:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)

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