Talk:Manuel Komnenos (son of Andronikos I)/GA1

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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 12:58, 6 November 2020 (UTC)Reply


  • "File:Manuel1 Marie.jpg" needs a US PD tag.
    • Done.
  • Caption: "Miniature portrait of Andronikos I (from a 15th-century codex containing a copy of the Extracts of History by Joannes Zonaras". Either remove the opening parenthesis or add a closing one.
    • Done.
  • Infobox: "after" should have a capital A.
    • Done.
  • "The name and identity of his mother are unknown". Would not 'The identity of his mother is unknown' convey the same information?
    • Quite right, changed..
  • Link Georgian, chronicler
    • Georgian is already linked earlier, done re chronicler.
  • Cite 41 has a hyphen in the page range!!
    • Fixed.

Hi Gog the Mild, done. Anything else? As usual, any comments beyond GA requirements would be welcome, esp. regarding comprehensibility. I would like to push this up to FA eventually. Constantine 09:07, 14 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hi Constantine, it reads fine to me. As you probably gathered, I could find very little to pick at. Gog the Mild (talk) 11:21, 14 November 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Gog the Mild: Great to hear! Thanks again, and stay healthy! Constantine 10:01, 15 November 2020 (UTC)Reply
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