Talk:Maputeoa/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:48, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:48, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

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• was a monarch of the Polynesian island of Mangareva and the other Gambier Islands. He was the King or ʻAkariki (paramount chief), as well as the penultimate king of the island of Mangareva, and other Gambier Islands including Akamaru, Aukena, Taravai and Temoe. He reigned from 1830 until his death in 1857. suggest:

  was the King or ʻAkariki (paramount chief) of Mangareva and the other Gambier Islands including Akamaru, Aukena, Taravai and Temoe. He was the penultimate king of the island, and reigned from 1830 until his death in 1857.

• and even made the islanders wear tunics suggest:

  and even convinced the islanders to wear tunics

  Changed.KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

• @KAVEBEAR: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 11:10, 23 July 2018 (UTC)