Talk:Marauders (Star Trek: Enterprise)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Johanna (talk · contribs) 01:40, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Third on my "to review" list. Johanna^{(talk to me!)} 01:40, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Comments

• In the first sentence of the lead, please reverse the order of the clauses to better fit other television articles (i.e. "... is the sixth episode of the second season of...")
• It should be "characters' interactions" not "character's interactions"
• Perhaps a file of Roddenberry for the Production section?
• Link to Robert April
• Assuming that most of that second paragraph is sourced to ref 3, I would ref name it and sprinkle it in in a few more places for easier access.
• In the final sentence of production, there's a typo in the title of the episode.
• In your home media paragraph, you say that it was released as part of the season three DVD, which I assume is wrong...
• All refs have been archived and look fine.

@Miyagawa: That's all I have for this article. It's not the longest piece but it is comprehensive. Fix these comments and I will be able to promote. Johanna^{(talk to me!)} 04:21, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

@Johanna: Thanks, that should be everything covered. Not sure what I was thinking with that lead mix up (or the season three bit - I thought I'd linked to the wrong source, but it was pointed at the season 2 DVD source). Now I need to go double check the other season 2 GAs to make sure I haven't done the same thing there! Miyagawa (talk) 08:38, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

@Miyagawa: Great. Pass. Johanna^{(talk to me!)} 15:14, 3 March 2016 (UTC)