Talk:Marceau-class ironclad/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
Great work so far on this article. I have a few comments:
- 100-guns?
- Fixed
- when talking about the weight of guns, could you include the bore as well?
- That's an issue - Ropp doesn't give the caliber of the French guns, just their weight, and since they were only experimental, they don't turn up in sources like Friedman. I can provide numbers for the Italian guns, but I don't know that the French were the same. I'd think readers would assume so, and I don't want to lead them to draw false conclusions
- suggest linking t in the body when converting displacement
- Done
- range of engines not in the infobox
- Fixed
- range of boilers not in the infobox
- Fixed
- suggest adding the calibre of the secondary guns in the body
- Done
- same comments about the TTs as the Neptune review
- Fixed
- no range for cruising?
- Not in the sources
- the bottom end of the belt range is slightly different between the infobox and body
- Fixed
- in the even of damage
- Good eye
- "64 mm (2.5 in) thick gun shields"
- Done
- "top-heavy superstructures and masts cut down" in the lead needs to be reflected in the body
- Done
- specify water-tube boilers in the modernization to reflect the lead
- Done
- File:Neptune on Penfeld-Edmond Chagot mg 8229b.jpeg needs licensing for the actual painting, per the 2D reproduction rules
- Updated per the Neptune GA review
That's all I could find, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:59, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 22:07, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:35, 7 April 2020 (UTC)