Talk:Margot Römer

Latest comment: 5 years ago by JessBlack94 in topic Peer Review

Peer Review

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I like how you had an introductory section separate from the Bio. I also like how you bolded the exhibitions but the line spacing seems off. Also if there are separate wiki pages on those exhibitions that would be a great place to link them. In the bio you say “she became preoccupied with environmental and social issues” which seems slightly negative it might flow better if you say something like, she changed her focus too… other than that the page is looking great I especially like how you formatted everything.

JessBlack94 (talk) 22:56, 14 May 2019 (UTC)Reply