Talk:Mark Mitchell (New Zealand politician)

Latest comment: 9 months ago by Dudsud in topic Mercenary in lead
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Mercenary in lead

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What’s with the IP edits removing “mercenary” from the lead section? He spent years in Iraq as a security contractor and started a $100+ million mercenary company which he later sold off, shouldn’t be contentious. I’ll add it back again, I assume there’s some busybodies not too happy about the recent news coverage. Dudsud (talk) 23:19, 21 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

The word "mercenary" appears in the lead only. As the lead is supposed to be a summary of the article, it would be appropriate for the word to also be used in the body of the article. That way, it's far less contentious, Dudsud. Schwede66 23:29, 21 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
Happy to either edit the body to include that term, or use another term like “security contractor” depending on what is used in the body. Dudsud (talk) 05:02, 22 February 2024 (UTC)Reply