Talk:Mars Attacks!/GA1

GA Review

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Hi, I am review this article for GA. I think the article is well written and interesting. I have done a little copy editing to fix a few small errors. I have only a few comments. —Mattisse (Talk) 16:39, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

• "ack ack" dialogue - what is this?
• "The A-list ensemble cast pays tribute to the 1970s Irwin Allen disaster films" - how does the caste pay tribute?
• "The department workers studied Gloria Swanson's role as Norma Desmond in Sunset Boulevard (1950) for inspiration on the Martians' movement." - what did they get out of studing Gloria Swanson't role? How did this translate to the move?

All in all, the article is quite well done, in my opinion.

—Mattisse (Talk) 16:39, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing, sorry if I was acting strange earlier, I might have just been having a bad day. Anyway, I addressed your concerns for Mars Attacks! Good day. Wildroot (talk) 21:14, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Final GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): Well written b (MoS): Follows MoS

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): Well referenced b (citations to reliable sources): Sources are reliable c (OR): No OR

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): Covers major aspects b (focused): Remains focued on topic

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias: NPOV

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Congratulations. Very interesting article. (Makes me want to see the film!)

—Mattisse (Talk) 21:44, 26 April 2009 (UTC)