Talk:Martín Insaurralde/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Larry Hockett in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Larry Hockett (talk · contribs) 09:59, 26 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

I will review this. It seems that the GA nominator has been inactive for months, so I will leave some initial feedback and see whether we get a response within a few days. Larry Hockett (Talk) 09:59, 26 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Initial feedback

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  • The lead section seems a bit too short to adequately summarize this entry.
  • The article is missing some things that we usually find in a GA-class biographical article. There is no mention of the subject's early life, his education, or his career/occupation before entering politics.
  • The sections describing his career mostly just list election results. We need more information on his political service itself.

We will stop here for now and await a response. Larry Hockett (Talk) 10:24, 26 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

It has been nearly two weeks, and no edits have been made to address the feedback here. I'm going to close this nomination for now. Hopefully the feedback above will help any editor who might decide to nominate this again. Larry Hockett (Talk) 03:40, 12 March 2021 (UTC)Reply