Talk:Martha Ray

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Piledhigheranddeeper in topic Hunh?

Hunh?

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The intro to this article describes its subject as "a British singer" and says she is best known famous for her affair with the Earl of Sandwich. Yet the body text of the article is almost entirely devoted to her affair with James Hackman (who is mentioned in virtually every sentence) and her murder, neither of which is even mentioned in the intro. It's as if the intro was the first section of the article, sliced off and forced to be an intro. --Piledhigheranddeeper (talk) 19:33, 7 April 2022 (UTC)Reply