Talk:Marvel Cinematic Universe/GA2

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Reviewer: Prashant! (talk · contribs) 03:26, 17 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Here, I see the same problem in refrenceing style. Checkout.—Prashant 14:16, 17 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Done. -Fandraltastic (talk) 16:56, 17 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Why it is listed one after the other? "The first film to be released in the Marvel Cinematic Universe was Iron Man (2008), followed by The Incredible Hulk (2008), Iron Man 2 (2010), Thor (2011), Captain America: The First Avenger (2011), Marvel's The Avengers (2012), Iron Man 3 (2013), Thor: The Dark World (2013) and Captain America: The Winter Soldier (2014)."

  • You should split the names by phases. Like "The films within MCU are released in Phases.........Phase 1 (film names), phase 2 (film names)....." or something like that as its neccessary to talk about the phases in the lead if they are an essential part of the body.—Prashant 08:21, 31 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

I would suggest to expand it a bit. There is no text about seperate films, in production, Box-office gross, critical reception and review aggregation, etc. Please, take a look at the Harry Potter (film series) article for more details.—Prashant 08:21, 31 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

This article is about the entire media franchise. List of Marvel Cinematic Universe films is about the film series, with the information you are looking for. This is clearly noted in the film section of the page, and the split was performed due to size and scope concerns. -Fandraltastic (talk) 14:16, 31 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

I reworked the lead a bit (and added something in Reception), if you care, @Prashant!:. igordebraga 16:16, 3 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

Ok Prashant!, everyone is waiting for your further comments here. Kailash29792 (talk) 09:08, 6 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

Well, Sorry for the delay as I'm busy with my studies. I will continue now.—Prashant 20:45, 6 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

  • Development
  1. "Marvel Studios president Kevin Feige realized that unlike Spider-Man and the X-Men, who were licensed to Columbia and Fox respectively, Marvel still owned the rights to the core members of The Avengers."
Who? you are talking about the comic rights or the superheroes in person?
  • Short films
  1. The first film, a second, a third film, a fourth film, a fifth film? It sounds repeatative. Tweak it a bit.—Prashant 20:57, 6 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
Done and done. -Fandraltastic (talk) 22:05, 6 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! Well, I didn't found any other problems with the article.—Prashant 10:18, 12 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

Pretty good effort overall, thanks for addressing the points and sorry for the delay.—Prashant 10:18, 12 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for the pass and review Prashant! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 13:58, 12 April 2014 (UTC)Reply