Talk:Marvin Williams (footballer)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Will read this article and shall provide my feedback soon. MWright96 (talk) 10:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "A spell at Swedish Third Division club Östersunds FK followed in April 2010, playing seven times before leaving the club in June that year." - team to avoid close reptition of the same word
• "and subsequently signed for another Conference South team in the form of Sutton United in October 2012." - better; for fellow Conference South team Sutton United in October 2012.

Millwall

• "Williams signed his first professional contract with the club, signing the contract just hours before Millwall's FA Cup tie against Premier League club Everton. - Williams signed his first professional contract with Millwall, just hours before the club's FA Cup tie against Premier League club Everton.
• "Williams' goal came in injury-time, a goal which was" - one

Yevoil Club

• "Ahead of the 2007–08 season, on 26 July 2007, Williams signed for Yeovil Town of League One for an undisclosed fee, signing a two-year contract with the club." - Williams signed a two-year contact for Yevoil Town of League One for an undisclosed fee.

Brentford

• "Williams was placed on the transfer-list by Brentford manager Andy Scott. Scott stated that" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this.
• " Williams was placed on the transfer-list by Brentford manager Andy Scott." - also; Williams was transfer listed by Brentford Manager Andy Scott

Return to England

• "He became an regular member of Salisbury's playing squad adding another goal" - add a comma between "squad" and "adding"
• "in a 2-2 draw" - the hyphen needs to be replaced by an en dash

Style of play

• "When Williams signed for Brentford in 2008, manager Andy Scott described Williams as a" - him and remove "a"

References

• References 2, 30 are missing the authors of the respective articles
• Reference 36 is permantely dead and will need replacing
• References 59, 60 and 61 need to be correctly formatted
• Reference 62 needs the title of the article and the date it was published

Nice work so far. Not too much to be undertaken in this review. MWright96 (talk) 15:22, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time out to review the article @MWright96: I've made all of the changes you've mentioned. I have also given the career statistics table a refresh. Let me know if there's anything else. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:44, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

• @SBFCEdit: No problem. Have nothing else to raise, so this article can now be promoted to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 20:48, 4 January 2019 (UTC)