Talk:Maurice de Germiny

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Samuel Tan in topic Copy edit (July 2008)

Copy edit (July 2008)

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I did a copy edit and left a jargon tag because this sentence has phrases that are unclear: "He subsequently trained for the ministry and became Curé of St. Sevérin, a key left-bank Parisian parish." The italicized phrases should be elaborated upon. Cheers! -Samuel Tan 05:41, 25 July 2008 (UTC)Reply