Talk:Maybe It's Time/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 07:29, 14 April 2019 (UTC)

Lead

• The lead is kind of short, isn't it? Try to include information about the genre, background, reception, ...

Infobox

• The release, as well as the recording year, length and "folk rock" aren't cited in the article's body

Background and writing

• Actor and director of A Star Is Born, Bradley Cooper, had approached → Bradley Cooper, the actor and director of A Star Is Born, had approached
• for crafting the sound of the soundtrack, after listening to the latter's work → for crafting the sound of the soundtrack after listening to the his work
• and asked him to write a song for the soundtrack → and Cooper eventually asked the latter to write a song for the soundtrack
• Isbell asked to see the screenplay and got in touch with Cooper to understand his character → Isbell was given a copy of the film's screenplay and discussed with Cooper on his character
• realistic sounding → realistic-sounding
• to work about for bringing the change → something about this does not sound right
• They were impressed and Cooper felt that the → They applauded the track, with Cooper feeling that the
• Link "substance abuse"

Recording and composition

• with additional vocal production from Gaga → cite the soundtrack liner notes here as well
• Alissa Wilkinson from the website → "from the website" is superfluous and can be removed
• that the song lyrics → that the song's lyrics
• allow someone else to shine → this is very unencyclopedic
• during the chorus, and the vocals span → during the chorus; the vocals span
• Link "drag bar"
• Before production Cooper had reached → comma after "production"
• On October 22, 2018, Isbell performed the song live at Ryman Auditorium in Nashville, as part of the encore, warning the audience that he was singing a sad tune and "trying to tell y'all the truth. If you don't like sad movies, maybe you go see the Spiderman thing."[11] Pearl Jam's Eddie Vedder covered the song live at Tempe, Arizona's Innings Festival in 2019. → This does not fit into this section

Outcome

• Failed — I have only reviewed halfthrough, but I feel like the article is very messy, both by the writing, the sourcing and the structure. Also, the lead needs a considerable expansion for this to be passed. I recommend taking it to WP:GOCE and renominate eventually. Greetings; Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:11, 16 April 2019 (UTC)

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