Talk:Me Against the Music/GA1
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I am the reviewer--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 04:47, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Working on the song
- reaching number one in countries such as -> Re-word
Background and recording
edit- commented she liked the track -> that
Composition
editLooks good
Critical reception
edit- 2003 MTV Music Video Awards.".
- Dorian Lynskey of The Guardian noted the it as -> Noted it
- denounced the track as a "'Into the Groove' redux -> an
Chart performance
edit- It was Spears 10th chart hit, as well as the first of her entries that she had co-written -> You haven't mentioned her co-writing the song yet. I think is its her first, its something worth mentioning in previous sections.
- There aren't any sources stating that she wrote it other than the writing credits. Maybe she pulled a Beyoncé and stole them :P I don't know really. Xwomanizerx (talk) 18:25, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- since "Love Don't Live Here Anymore" -> You should provide the year.
- On the issue dated November 29, 2003, "Me Against the Music" peaked at number thirty-five -> Issues of what?
- Billboard issue? Xwomanizerx (talk) 18:25, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
Music video (development)
editLooks good.
Synopsis
editLooks good.
Release and reception
editLooks good.
Live performances
edit- she performed in American music show TRL -> on the
- at Staples Center. -> at the
Cover version
editLooks good.
Overall, really good job! Every article you do gets better and better :).--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 15:52, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you! Xwomanizerx (talk) 18:25, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- Good job! I'm passing it.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 00:11, 5 November 2010 (UTC)