Talk:Meat (Torchwood)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 03:38, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

• Image: Expand upon the "To illustrate a key element of the plot." on the image page. Maybe noted that the alien was computer generated and resembled "a giant kebab"

Done.

• Lede: Link second series

Done

• Lede: why is sock puppet un-quoted, but hand puppet is?

No idea. I unquoted hand puppet because I think that makes more sense than to have both quoted.

• Plot: Link characters' names and put who plays who in parenthesis after they are introduced

Done. Seeing as I have a "background" and "events" section in the article I haven't linked characters mentioned in both sections twice. Three actors mentioned do not have notability so I refrained from adding red links.

• References: Anytime you separate numbers, be it a date or pages, you should use an en-dash ("–") instead of a regular dash ("-"). An en-dash needs to be added to Refs 25 and 27

Added.

On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:01, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

Thanks very much for the review! Eshlare (talk) 22:54, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

Looks good! I will pass it now! Cheers.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:50, 31 May 2012 (UTC)