Talk:Mechanization and Modernization Agreement 1960

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Jmabel in topic Incoherent sentence

Incoherent sentence

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The first sentence of the "Provisions" section is incoherent. I can't even tell what it means to say so I can fix it. "Harry Bridges, then current leader of the ILWU, designed the Mechanization and Modernization Agreement was signed on October 18, 1960." - Jmabel | Talk 01:44, 16 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • User:Belmagutie wrote that sentence in 2013. The initial draft of this article is their only substantive contribution to the English-language Wikipedia (or any other WMF project) so we aren't liable to get any help on that front as to what they meant. - Jmabel | Talk 01:48, 16 February 2023 (UTC)Reply