Talk:Megumi Nakajima/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 02:44, 9 May 2019 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:44, 9 May 2019 (UTC)

• Ref 1 needs to be expanded to a full citation.
• Ref 4 is dead.
• "|lead=yes" needed for {{nihongo}}.
• "and singer from Mito, Ibaraki who is affiliated with E-Stone Music." Comma needed after Ibaraki.
• "Her path to becoming a musician" Euphemism?
• "Her break came in 2007" Debut?
• "she along withHaruka Tomatsu" Space needed.
• Macross Frontier is being overlinked in the article.
• The last paragraph of the Musical styles and influences section belongs in the music career more.
• Any information on how she produced her first album?
• "Lagrange: The Flower of Rin-neseries" Space here too.
• "Happiness Charge Precure!" Not correctly formatted title of the anime.
• Why do some of the roles have Japanese translations and some don't?
• I would considering linking her works with articles from the Japanese Wikipedia.
  • Use {{Interlanguage link}} for Japanese Wikipedia articles.
• Link video game consoles and compact disc.
• Assuming good faith on Japanese sources.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:21, 13 May 2019 (UTC)

I've fixed almost all of the issues mentioned above. Ref 4 was a permanent dead link so, while dead links aren't prohibited, I decided to simply commented out since there was a working link that verified the same information. The lede has been revised slightly too, and the words with missing spaces have been fixed. I've delinked Macross wherever not necessary, and I moved the hiatus part to the music section, as you suggested. Unfortunately, I was unable to find any interviews about the production of I Love You. The Japanese translations were not added by me but by previous editors; they didn't seem to be necessary so I simply removed them. I linked the consoles, but not to compact disc since I'd argue that CDs are well-known enough and in any case there's that hover thing where putting the cursor over CD shows "compact disc". Any more problems? Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 11:00, 13 May 2019 (UTC)

After a few more minor issues were found and fixed on Discord, I am passing this article. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:33, 14 May 2019 (UTC)