Talk:Meine Seel erhebt den Herren, BWV 10/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Gerda Arendt in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:37, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
- Why isn't "Magnificat" in italics, per the article it links to?
- Because the article it links to still thinks it is Latin, while a discussion supported that terms from Latin that became part of the English language (Requiem, Agnus Dei, Nunc dimittis ...) don't need that. --GA
- "narrates Mary's" I hate pipelinks to redirects, avoid that here with Mary please.
- fixed, thank you --GA
- "only beginning and end of the text were " "the beginning..." ?
- fixed --GA
- "which he also kept" replace "he" with "was".
- why passive voice? --GA
- You link trumpet but not oboe, why?
- both unlinked now (links to Baroque instruments in the link before)
- You appear to have different piped links for "Lutheran", please be consistent.
- made two consistent, and removed the one to only a section of the same --GA
- Why 76?
- good catch! --GA
- "Bach-Cantatas website." Wikipedia appears to italicise websites, certainly in its referencing templates such as {{cite web}}.
- Nobody complained in FAs, but changed. --GA
Everything else seems in order, so I'll put it on hold. The Rambling Man (talk) 22:33, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you for many helpful comments! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:34, 1 May 2017 (UTC)