Talk:Men in Black: Alien Attack/GA1

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 22:19, 27 November 2013 (UTC)

This should be fairly easy to review. -- Zanimum (talk) 22:19, 27 November 2013 (UTC)

For sake of consistency, can we stick to either J and Z or Jay and Zed?

I think I have fixed up all remaining instances. If there are any others, please let me know. Themeparkgc  Talk  23:27, 28 November 2013 (UTC)

Infobox

• While it's obvious that ref 10 is where the $70 million cost is from, it's not mentioned in the article itself, nor is the reference in the infobox.

Made a mention in the article itself with ref 10 as citation. Themeparkgc  Talk  23:27, 28 November 2013 (UTC)

• having 127 in brackets after ASI's name in the animatronics section doesn't read properly that there's 127 figures in the ride, it frankly reads like an ISO alternative. Can the section lead with 127?

Fixed Themeparkgc  Talk  23:27, 28 November 2013 (UTC)

• 7 targets on average, per animatronic. Is there any sort of stat on total targets for the whole ride? The article says that there's targets on the ride vehicles too.

Unfortunately that's all I could find. Themeparkgc  Talk  23:27, 28 November 2013 (UTC)

Pre-show: Pass

Interior queue

• Normal riders see the queue, Express Pass skip the queue, what do single riders see?

I've made it consistent now, so there is a mention of all three queues. Themeparkgc  Talk  23:27, 28 November 2013 (UTC)

Production

• This is your third mention of Universal Creative. You do link to it from the article, but never in the article itself do you state whether it's part of Universal Parks, just as with the Imagineers, or independent and just conveniently named...

Added "the research and development division of Universal Parks & Resorts" after the first mention of Universal Creative. Themeparkgc  Talk  23:27, 28 November 2013 (UTC)

Passing "See also" (interesting that "List of amusement rides based on film franchises" exists), "External links".

More to come. -- Zanimum (talk) 13:56, 28 November 2013 (UTC)

Lead: pass.

Ride

• "The bug stands 30 feet (9.1 m) tall..." are these the dimensions of the bug in the movie, or the bug on the ride? Is this an animatronic figure, a projection, or something else?

Ride system

• "Islands of Adventure... was developing two new dark ride systems": I'm guessing that it was actually Universal Creative developing two systems for Islands of Adventure? For Cat in the Hat, MTS is listed as developing the system... so really Universal Creative was developing one system and co-developing another for Islands of Adventure?

More to come. -- Zanimum (talk) 20:53, 29 November 2013 (UTC)

Clarified both those points. Themeparkgc  Talk  03:20, 30 November 2013 (UTC)

Passing, congrats! -- Zanimum (talk) 22:08, 1 December 2013 (UTC)

Great, thanks. Themeparkgc  Talk  22:14, 1 December 2013 (UTC)