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Commeration
editCould something be added explaining exactly why this event is commemorated? for what reasons? Uberlieder (talk) 04:33, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
Concerning my edits
editMuch of this article was taken from the German and Turkish versions of same. However the NPOV status was askew. The German and Turkish versions being more NPOV than the English version. I edited it and hope they are now relatively equal. Önce Vatan Tjlynnjr (talk) 21:58, 4 May 2014 (UTC).
Wooden bullets ?
editIn the paragraph "Rebellion" there is a mention of the use of wooden bullets by the Turkish soldiers. Sounds unusual, so here is some information:
- Wooden Bullets Used in Peace and War. Designed for training and practice, these less-than lethal wooden bullets were often used in combat over the last 100 years. Christopher L. Eger, Feature writer of military history and recovering gun nut. [1] Retrieved: 13 June 2014.
- National Library of Australia. Trove. Wooden Bullets. Why the Turkish Troops Fled from the Servians [2] Retrieved: 13 June 2014.
- Gunboards.com Thread: How do you pull wooden bullets ? [3] Retrieved: 13 June 2014.
- International Ammunition Association, Inc. An Introduction to Collecting .30-06 Cartridges [4] Retrieved: 13 June 2014.
- 70th Infantry Division Association. Wooden Bullets [5] Retrieved: 13 June 2014
- Wikipedia: 10.15×61mmR
- Wkipedia: Rubber bullet
Önce Vatan Tjlynnjr (talk) 09:31, 13 June 2014 (UTC) .
Concerning the edits of 25 July 2014
editThank you to User:78ata and welcome to Wikipedia. I believe there are some problems with these edits and I am taking the following actions soon, awaiting some comments:
- 1. Removing last sentence of lead paragraph. It negates the finality of the paragraph and is confusing, (compare).
- 2. Adjusting the Notes 2,3 & 4 used as references which are articles that do not refer to this incident specifically. Said sources are of a general nature related to religious reassertion vs. secularism. However, the sources are interesting reading.
- 3. There are some grammar and spelling problems.
- 4. The last sentence of the paragraph "Governemnt reaction" sums up the secularist outcome of this incident, no embellishment is needed.
- 5. We wish to avoid an edit war and dispense with possibly inflammatory wording.
- 6. I will be bringing some information and references from the TR:Wiki article soon.
NB: Please post comments here for all to enjoy. Her Șey Vatan İçin Tjlynnjr (talk) 22:18, 27 July 2014 (UTC) .
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editWikipedia:Greek and Turkish Wikipedians cooperation board [6] Her Șey Vatan İçin Tjlynnjr (talk) 22:35, 27 July 2014 (UTC) .