Talk:Merlin O'Neill

Succession Box

Somebody who knows how needs to fix the succession box for this article. --TommyBoy 05:08, 28 February 2006 (UTC)

Task complete, cleanup tag removed. --TommyBoy 11:22, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

Suggestions

G'day, good work so far with this article. I have a couple of suggestions for further improvement:

• the lead probably should be expanded by a couple more sentences as it should briefly summarise the entire article;
• the body of the article should probably make note of if O'Neill married and had children (if known), what he did in retirement (if known), and when and where he died (I note that this information is already included in the infobox). This doesn't need to be too long, maybe just one or two sentences. Cheers, AustralianRupert (talk) 22:24, 25 December 2012 (UTC)