Talk:Mess L

Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for creating the article!.

✠ SunDawn ✠ (contact) 10:28, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 23:18, 1 July 2022 (UTC)

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• ... that Mess L, a multipurpose building in Banjarbaru, Indonesia, was historically used to house Soviet workers? Source: https://www.teras7.com/mess-l-banjarbaru-kemesraan-presiden-soekarno-dan-rusia/
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Red Jordan Arobateau
  • Comment: CE will be very appreciated

Created by Nyanardsan (talk). Self-nominated at 13:14, 10 June 2022 (UTC).

• @Nyanardsan: It has been over a week since the nomination and no QPQ has been provided. A QPQ needs to be provided soon (ideally it should have been within seven days of the nomination) so that the nomination can proceed, thank you. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:04, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

• Apologize for late reply. QPQ done now Nyanardsan (talk) 13:18, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

• Thank you, this is ready for a new review. I could however suggest mentioning that Banjarbaru is in Indonesia because right now it's not obvious in the hook. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:50, 24 June 2022 (UTC)

• Done, added clarification that Banjarbaru is in Indonesia Nyanardsan (talk) 13:01, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
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QPQ: Done.

Overall: This is just a suggestion, but the words "also" and "the building" are used three times in three sentences right after each other. Those could be worded differently. I did a small copyedit, but more might need to be done. SL93 (talk) 20:42, 30 June 2022 (UTC)