Talk:Mi Mayor Venganza

Mi Mayor Venganza has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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Date	Process	Result
June 29, 2022	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

Latest comment: 2 years ago5 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mi Mayor Venganza/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:52, 27 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )

3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will start this today! --K. Peake 16:52, 27 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good!
Add a comma after fifth studio album
"by Isidro Infante and released as" → "by Isidro Infante, and released as"
You need to add the genre in comp as salsa with a source, rather than merely having a mention of it in reception
"song in which La India tells the woman" → "song, in which La India tells the woman"
The lead is out of order after the above sentence; critical reception should come first, then the accolade followed by commercial performance and finally the music video
"for the track features" → "for the song features"
"was praised by two music critics while" → "were praised by two music critics, while"
"peaked at number four and one" → "peaked at numbers four and one"
"It was a recipient of" → "The song was a recipient of"

Background and composition

A colon is not needed after five singles
Remove comma before Jazzin'
"and arranger, Isidro Infante, signed on to" → "and arranger Isidro Infante signed with"
"produced by Infante whom" → "produced by Infante, whom"
"and is her" → "and is La India's"
Remove comma after "Mi Mayor Venganza"
Add a sentence with a source clarifying the song itself is salsa, also add more comp info if you can
"Jerry Rivera and" → "Jerry Rivera, and"

Promotion and reception

Remove wikilink on RMM Records
"was for the song filmed" → "for the song was filmed"
"lauded La India's vocals stating her" → "lauded La India's vocals, stating her"
"energizes the track."" → "energizes the track"." per MOS:QUOTE
No speech marks are used to end the "comes through like a champ..." quote
The award should come directly before commercial performance
"Commercially "Mi Mayor Venganza" reached number 4" → "Commercially, "Mi Mayor Venganza" reached number four" per MOS:NUM
Remove pipe on Billboard
"it ended 1998 ranked" → "the song ended 1998 ranked as"

Charts

Good

References

Copyvio score looks great at 24.8%!!!
Rest of the refs look good; well done!!!!!

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed after this quick review! --K. Peake 18:58, 27 June 2022 (UTC)Reply
@Kyle Peake Thanks as always for your reviews! I believe I have addressed all the issues brought up, let me know if there's any I missed. Erick (talk) 16:48, 28 June 2022 (UTC)Reply
✓ Pass now, there was one grammatical mistake but I smoothened it out totally! --K. Peake 07:28, 29 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

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