Talk:Mi PC

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 22:26, 20 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox

• Needs alt
• Fix studios according to Template:Infobox song#studio

 Done

Lead

• by the singer. → by Guerra himself
• It is a merengue track → see below as it is also a pop song.
• The song was released as the lead single from the album in November 1998 by Karen Records. → this should be placed after the first sentence
• Mention live performances

 Done

Background and composition

• By June 1998, however, → However, in June 1998,
• start all over with the project → further record
• Additional recording for the disc took place in New York and Santo Domingo → How do you know those were the studios for additional recording?
• "Mi PC" is a merengue song → A billboard critic, John Lannert, also called it a pop/merengue

 Done

Promotion and reception

• In spite of giving Ni Es lo Mismo Ni Es Igual a mixed review, Deborah Davis wrote for El Norte cited it as one of songs from the album that is "moving and intelligent" → In a mixed review, El Norte's Deborah Davis cited "Mi PC" as one of the songs from the album that is "moving and intelligent".
• and the 2000 Viña del Mar Festival, → and at the 2000 Viña del Mar Festival.[18][19]
• in the US; → in the United States.
• it spent two weeks at this position on the former chart → should mention the latter chart as it spent more weeks there at the top position

 Done

Weekly charts

• Why there is no use of the entry charts?

Justified. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:37, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

Year-end charts

• Fine

See also

• Fine

References

• Source check: 1, 4, 5, 7-10, 12, 15, 17, 20, 21 and 23

Overall

• Studios should be removed from the body of the article and infobox as these studios are from the album recording, not the song itself.
• Let me know once you are. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:25, 22 June 2022 (UTC)

  @MarioSoulTruthFan Hey ya! So for whatever reason (probably Billboard's website incompetency) Juan Luis Guerra was removed from their database. So for the weekly charts table, that's why it appears that way. For this song, I don't see the need for the entry charts. Other than that, I think everything else has been resolved. Erick (talk) 21:48, 22 June 2022 (UTC)

  No problem, its BB fault then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:59, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

  I made some small changes and you have yet to address one issue. Please see if the changes are ok and fix what's left. The latter chart is the tropical. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:04, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

  I thought I addressed that? Or did you want me to mention the name of the chart instead using the word "latter"? Erick (talk) 14:25, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

  You have the wrong link. Should have said this to begin with. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

  Ooohhh, got it. It's been fixed now. Erick (talk) 15:10, 23 June 2022 (UTC)