Talk:Michael's Last Dundies/GA1

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:23, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

• "... will be his co-host at the Dundies." -- The dundies is sort of an in-joke for the show, and may not be familiar to the average reader. Please explain what they are or reference a previous episode that featured them.

  Added.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:45, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

• "...After work, the employees arrive at the Dundies" It's at a Chili's like the other ones, right? This should be noted.

  Changed. It was actually some fake Italian restaurant.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:45, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

• " Ferrell initially called the producers and offered to appear in Carell's last season" -- as in, he wanted to be in the entire season?

  Clarified.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:45, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

• Just an opinion, but I think Chili's should also be mentioned in the Cultural References section, as it's a recurring theme in the series that he goes there a lot.

  Unfortunately, it wasn't at a Chili's. That was just the first one.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:45, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

• Reception should note the reviews on Ferrell's character in the previous episode, and how he was received in the overall story arc. If I recall correctly, his appearance was highly anticipated but with each successive episode, the character fell flat.

  Added.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:45, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

• "Jack Coleman as State Sen. Robert Lipton" is noted in the infobox, but not in the body of the article. It needs a citation.

  Well, for infoboxes, it's generally acceptable to use the episode as the source (the end credits). And since this is an article about the episode, it would be rather redundant to cite the episode in an article about the episode.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:45, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

• Dup links tool shows four duplicate links: Will Ferrell; Steve Carrell; The Office (U.S. season 2); The Dundies.

  Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:45, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

• Dab links tool returns no problems. Some of the external links have access issues, but all of them still seem to be working. The image of Ferrell is properly licensed.

Will await your responses. —Ed!^(talk) 16:42, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

I have addressed or commented on all the concern. The link issues are weird, but they all work. Thanks for reviewing!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:45, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

Great work. Passing the article. —Ed!^(talk) 10:54, 18 January 2013 (UTC)