Talk:Michael VIII Palaiologos/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 07:34, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Reply


Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:34, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No dead links  Y
  • No missing citations  N
@Iazyges: The needed citations have been added. 20DKB03 (talk) 21:47, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Prose Suggestions

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • Suggest you expand lead paragraph, perhaps to do with his diplomatic and military actions. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 23:44, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • Although Michael won that round, suggest:
    Although Michael avoided punishment,
  • but also improved Michael's situation from a mere usurper to a leader worth following suggest:
    but also improved Michael's legitimacy by showing him as a competent leader.
  • again anathematized (excommunicated/shunned/cursed) Emperor, Patriarch, and Pope. suggest either removing the (excommunicated/shunned/cursed), or moving it the first usage of the word.