Talk:Michel Sadelain

Review

Some remarks after the first pass:

• "Sadelain was born in France where he earned his M.D. at the University of Paris, France in 1984." - ref needed, not supported by the provided inline source.
• The Research section needs ref formatting, obviously.
• Refs needed for the last two entries in the Awards section.
• Some work left to be done on formatting in general.

Otherwise it's a fine article and I see no problems. I'll do a second pass once inline refs are completed. GregorB (talk) 20:25, 31 August 2020 (UTC)

Hello GregorB, Can you take another look at the sandbox? I think I have addressed the issues with referencing and formatting. With that said, I have a bit of reference syntax cleanup to complete. Let me know what you think!--Chefmikesf (talk) 00:06, 4 September 2020 (UTC)

Thanks Chefmikesf! First of all, sorry for failing to finish the review sooner, I got interrupted a couple of times by off-wiki stuff.

Let me add some final remarks. This is a fine article in terms of sourcing and neutrality. There is no doubt that the subject of the article meets the notability guidelines, such as WP:PROF #1 (at the very least). Some minor tweaks may still be needed, but these are essentially technical (such as ref formatting) and may be done later, in article space (in fact, I will do some tweaks myself).

The categories are missing, they need to be added first. (In my opinion this should also count as a uncontroversial edit w.r.t. WP:COIU, as long as categorization is supported by the sources provided in the article.) GregorB (talk) 19:03, 16 September 2020 (UTC)

Moved to article space, two categories added. GregorB (talk) 19:12, 16 September 2020 (UTC)

This really came together and looks great GregorB! Thank you for the guidance and help on this article. I will take another pass and makes some updates to formatting and syntax as well.--Chefmikesf (talk) 01:51, 22 September 2020 (UTC)

Michel Sadelain Article Updates

Hello again :@Boghog: I came across your name again reading the Gene therapy article. Michel Sadelain has new articles about his work in the space and I noticed inaccuracies and typos on his Wikipedia article. I used the secondary sources to clean up the article and made additions to the article. Would you be open to reviewing my sandbox?--Chefmikesf (talk) 19:41, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

Hi Chefmikesf. Thank you for your contributions. Your edits to the Michel Sadelain article look good to me. My only comment is to watch out for WP:PEACOCK terms, such as "ample use", "was pivotal in the design of designed", "effective target", and "Sadelain also devised how to designed". Cheers. Boghog (talk) 03:41, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

@Boghog: Thanks for the feedback. Let me do another round of edits and I'll reach back out.--Chefmikesf (talk) 16:28, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

@Boghog: I made your suggested edits to the sandbox, would you feel comfortable at this point to replace the current version of the article with this sandbox version?--Chefmikesf (talk) 19:15, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

@Chefmikesf: Thanks for editing your draft. It now looks good to move to main space. Cheers.

@Boghog: Since I have a COI with the subject, would you allow me to make the updates? If so, I will repost this conversation on the article talk page. If not, I will wait for you to update the article.--Chefmikesf (talk) 17:35, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

@Chefmikesf: Thanks for clarifying that you have a conflict of interest. After reviewing your sandbox, I have no objections if you make the updates and feel free to reference this discussion. Cheers. Boghog (talk) 15:41, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

References

2024 Biography corrections and updates

Hi @Boghog, I notices a few inaccuracies and and few new additions for Dr. Sadelain's Wikipedia biography. Would you be open to adding these to the the article? -- Chefmikesf (talk) 20:37, 13 September 2024 (UTC)

Correct the date of the Passano Award to 2018 in the Infobox and Awards sections

Update: 2018 Pasteur-Servier-Weizmann Prize Laureate. to 2018 Pasteur-Weizmann/Servier Prize Laureate

Add the 2024 Warren Alpert Foundation Prize to the Infobox and Award section.

Add a sentence to the end of the Lead Paragraph: "Dr. Sadelain is an elected member of the National Academy of Medicine of France and the American Academy of Arts & Sciences." to the lead paragraph.

Add to the Memberships section:

• American Academy of Arts & Sciences
• National Academy of Medicine of France

References

Chefmikesf (talk) 20:37, 13 September 2024 (UTC)

 Done The sources check out, so I have added the above requests in this edit. Boghog (talk) 05:54, 14 September 2024 (UTC)