Talk:Michelle Handelman
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Improvements
editHere is a list of improvements you can make to this article Ryan Vesey Review me! 03:47, 17 May 2012 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Take a look at MOS:LEAD and use that to reformat the lead section. The lead section should summarize the content of the article.
Awards/Honors
edit- I'm certain that more awards and honors can be found.
- These should be in chronological order.
- Now that I think of it, Awards and honors may be a better title .
- Why did she receive these awards?
- Can the sentences be rewritten? Something like "she became a Guggenheim Fellow in 2011" then give a reason why. Who presents her with the honor?
Education
edit- Move the education section to before Awards/Honors
- What are the dates that she received her MFA and BFA?
- Again, these should be in chronological order with BFA coming before MFA
- Is there anything interesting about her education that can be added? Did she do anything important while in school?
Works
editI'll get to this later
References
edit- Replace bare url's using {{Cite web}} see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners for how to do this. It is easiest to use the refToolbar to do this. There is a 6 minute video that explains how to use it.
- Use ref name to combine references that use the same source. See Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners for how to do this. The refToolbar will make this easier.
External Links
edit- Move any possible external links to inline.
- Create titles for the references, rather than bare urls. This can be done by typing [URL.com TITLE OF URL]
Miscellaneous
edit- An infobox can be created for this article. Try {{Infobox person}} {{Infobox artist}} may work too.
- Some type of a life section should be created. When was she born? Information about her marriage can be moved there.
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