Assistance Requested for Improving Michelle Valberg Article

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Hello fellow editors,

I have recently created an article about Michelle Valberg, a distinguished Canadian photographer known for her work in nature and wildlife photography, and her philanthropic efforts in the Arctic regions. As I aim to ensure the article meets Wikipedia's standards for accuracy, neutrality, and comprehensiveness, I would appreciate any feedback, additional information, or improvements you might suggest.

The article covers her career, contributions to environmental awareness, and her initiatives through Project North, among other aspects of her life and work. Given the depth of her career and impact, there may be additional details and secondary sources that could enrich the article further.

Here is the link to the article: Draft:Michelle Valberg

Please feel free to edit directly or suggest changes on this talk page. Any help in making this a well-rounded and informative entry would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you in advance for your contributions and support.

Best regards Bojamon (talk) 16:49, 10 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

It's not good practice to reference her own website for obvious conflict of interest reasons. Also, I added citation needed twice, but both those sections could probably be eliminated. If you have enough information, it would look better to add an infobox. Curiocurio (talk) 00:51, 11 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for your feedback and for highlighting the citation issues. When you mention referencing her own website, could you please clarify which website you are referring to? I made sure to use third-party sources for the information.
Also, thanks for the suggestions about the sections needing citations. Regarding the infobox, that's a great idea! I’ll work on adding one. Bojamon (talk) 20:58, 12 May 2024 (UTC)Reply