Talk:Microlophus occipitalis

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Carolinaalisio in topic Article Review

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Hi! This was a great article and provided so much valuable information about the knobbed pacific iguanas. I read through the article and was able to edit the article for flow and better readability. You may consider including more images! Otherwise, great article. Chukka.vennela (talk) 11:53, 21 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hi guys! I added some information about the lizard with focus on behavior

Joshuachenwustl (talk) 09:30, 8 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hi! I added more information under some headings, organized the page set-up a little more, and altered the structure of some sentences for greater cohesiveness. Ritu27 (talk) 21:16, 21 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 31 August 2021 and 10 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Joshuachenwustl.

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Great article!

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I think this page looks great- I added some information under the diet section and reworded a few paragraphs to make the ideas flow better. mayafiore

Article Review

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I just did a review of the article and wanted to make a record of the changes since then. I thought thermoregulation was an important enough topic that it should be included in the summary of the article, so I included a quick sentence about it with the rest of the summary. I also added a quick section about lava lizards in general in the speciation section as I think the group of species the lizard belongs to is important and provides critical context. Otherwise, I thought the article was great! Kellencking (talk) 23:21, 21 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

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I was interested in the habitat of this organism, as they usually reside in south America instead of the United States. There are not that many sections this article is missing, but one it could add is the Parental care received by the animal. This would be useful following the mating section as it describes the usual life cycle of the organism before it becomes independent. Another good section to include would be the social behavior of the animal, including its adult sociality and group living. This would be great following the parental care, showing how the organism interacts after leaving their parent’s care. Finally, it would be great to learn more about their population structure, since both speciation and phylogeny are both mentioned but there is no clear section on this topic. Great collaboration from everyone on this article-- I very much enjoyed reading it! Carolinaalisio (talk) 20:42, 22 September 2022 (UTC)Reply