Talk:Micropsia/GA1

GA Review

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Hey there, I should start the review later tonight and hopefully finish it up within the week.

Reviewer: MacMed^talk_stalk 22:14, 23 November 2009 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• The "Word of the Day: Micropsia" link in External Links is dead.
• Is there any images that could illustrate the corneal swelling and/or the brain lesions mentioned in the lead?
• In the "Causes" section, can you explain what the aura phase of a migraine is?

Just waiting for the above to be fixed, and we can pass this. Regards, MacMed^talk_stalk 13:28, 25 November 2009 (UTC)

• "Word of the Day: Micropsia" has been removed from the External Links section.
• An MRI image that illustrates the types of a brain lesions that can cause micropsia has been added to the Causes section.
• A brief description of the aura phase of a migraine and a link to the main article that covers the condition in more depth have been added for further clarification.

The above changes have been made. Thank you for your review and if you have any other suggestions for improving the page, please let me know. CharlesWCII^talk_stalk 22:53, 25 November 2009 (UTC)

I've changed the capitalization of the photo caption, but that is it. Congratulations on your GA, and btw, I like your sig ;) Regards, MacMed^talk_stalk 23:25, 25 November 2009 (UTC)