Talk:Miguel Ángel Mancera/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 15:28, 27 November 2012 (UTC) I am glad to review this article. The review should commence in a short while. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 15:28, 27 November 2012 (UTC)

Lead

As all the information corroborates with the article's body, the lead passes.

Infobox

Interesting that a politician is labeled as being associated with a political party, and represents them, but never physically joins the party. Fascinating. A pass here.

Early life and education

"When he was four, he lived in Tacuba neighborhood..." He lived in the Tacuba neighborhood.
"Mancera asked Victoria Adato Green, then-Attorney General of the Federal District, to pursue the case, assisted by consultor Diego Ramudia, and managed to sanction the responsible driver." Fine is probably a better term here.
"...and after he revalidated four subjects..." What exactly does that mean?
Everything else is good.

Career

Great section, and a pass, here.

Candidacy

"On January 6, 2012, Mancera resigned to become candidate... Resigned as attorney general you mean, right?
"but both politicians disassociated themselves the incident." From the incident it should read.
" ...a review the issue of solid waste..." A review of the issue of solid waste, it should read.
Everything else is good here.

Personal life

"From 2008 to 2009, Mancera dated Alejandra Barrales." Who is that? Can you elaborate?
Everything else is good.

Conclusion

The bibliography is fine, and the images are good for usage, so as soon as these current issues are addressed, I can pass this nice, succinct little article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:22, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

All done. I made a minor changes, and I replaced the main image while the review was made. I also removed the "and after he revalidated four subjects", it also concerned the user who made the PR, and I don't know how I can translate it correctly. Thank you for choose the article and your review. Tbhotch.^™ Grammatically incorrect? Correct it! See terms and conditions. 05:33, 28 November 2012 (UTC)