Talk:Mike Pezzullo

Latest comment: 8 months ago by MatthewDalhousie in topic Tidy up needed
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Tidy up needed

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I find that articles that are updated immediately following news get badly distorted. This is a case in point.

If you look at article on parallel lives, like that of the senior public servant Martin Parkinson, there is no alarming mention of being sacked in 2014, let alone there being a whole section devoted to the topic. That seems much calmer and more balanced than what I see in the article here.

My view is the article needs a complete re-balance.

MatthewDalhousie (talk) 22:18, 27 February 2024 (UTC)Reply