Talk:Mildred Lewis Rutherford/GA1

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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 16:11, 28 June 2012 (UTC) I'll be doing this in short time, thanks! →TSU tp* 16:11, 28 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Sorry for the delay;

  • She was a prolific writer of textbooks and other works, and was also known for her oratory, delivered while dressed as a southern belle - Sounds little odd, can you please re-phrase it?
  • Mildred Rutherford was the daughter of Laura Cobb Rutherford (Howell and Thomas's sister) and Williams Rutherford, a professor of mathematics at the University of Georgia. - Please move this sentence to the line next to this: Rutherford was born July 16, 1851 in Athens, Georgia
  • Lucy Cobb Institute. was founded Thomas R.R. Cobb, so merge the last line of Family background with that of this: ...and the lawyer Thomas R.R. Cobb, one of the founders of the University of Georgia School of Law...
  • Lucy Cobb Institute has been linked many times. As it is already linked in the lead, no need of re-linking. 2 links (including the lead) are enough and others are overlinking so please remove them also.
  • In 1927 Rutherford became gravely ill - please change the word "gravely"
  • Also, add WP:ALT to the image in the infobox.

That is it for now. Once the problems are solved, I'll have a close look at it again. Cheers! →TSU tp* 01:11, 3 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

I think that's all of them. LadyofShalott 01:55, 3 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
No wait, one more. LadyofShalott 01:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
Now I think that's all of them. LadyofShalott 02:05, 3 July 2012 (UTC)Reply